6 for 15

  • tryinXtoXholdXmyXheadXup
    18 years ago

    i have six poems i want to make perfect and if you will comment on them leaving helpful advice i will do the same for 15 of your poems or all of them if you have less poems than that, please do this for me i really need help. for the first 7 people then i am closing this down
    nessa

    http://www.best-love-poems.com/poems.php?id=856689

    http://www.best-love-poems.com/poems.php?id=856682

    http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/sad/poems.php?id=854747

    http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/sad/poems.php?id=854813

    http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/sad/poems.php?id=850586

    http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/sad/poems.php?id=849461

  • BrixGoesxRawr
    18 years ago

    ^ Just to let you know.. I'm still awaiting for those comments from you. I think you've done two of them..

    Just thought I'd let you know.

  • tryinXtoXholdXmyXheadXup
    18 years ago

    thanks for that i am so sorry i forgot them, now i feel horrible please give me the links plus some to make it up, i am horribly sorry bri i promise i will make it up to you,
    nessa

  • BrixGoesxRawr
    18 years ago

    Lol, Hunny. Don't feel bad.. It's easy to forget. I will give you links.. How many do you want? You were supposed to do 8.. and you did 2.. So you had 6 left. You want me to just give you six links?

  • tryinXtoXholdXmyXheadXup
    18 years ago

    no thats not right so give me like ten? cause i feel horrible and i asked you for your help you gave it to me zand i forgot about your poems i dont want a bad name so yea i will make it up

  • BrixGoesxRawr
    18 years ago

    Hey Hunny. I'm going to give you 8. I think 10 is a bit too much.. You didn't mean too :] & I liked being able to help & give advice on a poem. I'm always here if you need some critique or want me to tell you what I think on a poem :]

    Be My Endless Love [Acrostic] –
    http://www.best-love-poems.com/poems.php?id=856753

    So Many Reasons [Freestyle] –
    http://www.best-love-poems.com/poems.php?id=856773

    Promises [Acrostic] –
    http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/sad/poems.php?id=856786

    You Say You Don't Want To See Me Hurt [Rondeau] –
    http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/sad/poems.php?id=856987

    Another Picture To Burn [Terzanelle]-
    http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/sad/poems.php?id=853503

    Don’t Move On-
    http://www.best-love-poems.com/poems.php?id=851973

    Too Good Is True [Quatern]-
    http://www.best-love-poems.com/poems.php?id=852026

    Fatal Memories-
    http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/sad/poems.php?id=831388

  • tryinXtoXholdXmyXheadXup
    18 years ago

    thank you i promise to get these done this time though i will have to finish up tomorow i am going to start now, thanks for the reminder and i am truly sorry, and i saved the links to my comp so i wont forget, i am truly truly sorry
    nessa

  • tryinXtoXholdXmyXheadXup
    18 years ago

    i got those done i dont think i voted though? dank it all. well let me know if i did it wrong or if i need to do more,
    nessa

  • BrixGoesxRawr
    18 years ago

    Lol.. You did them all :] & no need to do anymore. But no, you didn't vote.

    You don't have to if you don't want too.

    Bri [x]

  • tryinXtoXholdXmyXheadXup
    18 years ago

    ok i am sorry about that i got in a hurry to do em today b4 i leave for work, i will vote on random ones that need it , k?
    nessa

  • tryinXtoXholdXmyXheadXup
    18 years ago

    thanks if you cant do those poems make sure ou do six and i will still give you the 15 comments but please try to do those poems
    nessa

  • tryinXtoXholdXmyXheadXup
    18 years ago

    thats great thank you

  • tryinXtoXholdXmyXheadXup
    18 years ago

    thanks that would be great, just let me know and i will get em done asap

  • tryinXtoXholdXmyXheadXup
    18 years ago

    ok i am about to leave so i save the links to my comp and i promise you on everything i will do them first think in the morning,
    nessa

  • tryinXtoXholdXmyXheadXup
    18 years ago

    i have an emergencie so i will do these in like an hour or two , they will be done today ,promise,
    nessa
    this is still open to 3 people,
    nessa

  • tryinXtoXholdXmyXheadXup
    18 years ago

    liz i really appreciate your help but i really dont count "great write" and that stuff as comments sorry,
    i will look at some of your poems still but if you fix it i will do all of them ,sorry,
    nessa

  • tryinXtoXholdXmyXheadXup
    18 years ago

    i will i said i would and i dont go back on my word but i was just letting you know, sorry to upset you
    \nessa/