Kaila's contest

just write a poem about the following titles or ideas

Punkrock princess..(something corporate i know)
Trapped inside
My best friend
through your eyes
Abandoned
No one loves me
Shoes
My moms the best
I miss you dad (deceased)

first prize 10 comments and ratings and on favorites
second prize 6 comments and rating on favorites
third place 4 comments and rating
fourth place 2 comments and ratings

i'll try ~through your eyes~
thanx!

can i have trapped inside?

ill either do it tonight or when i get home from school tomorrow. thanks:D

Can i have punkrock princess?

My Shoes
by KH

I used to think you were wonderful,
More than anyone could ask for
You were the one I loved the most
But in the end, who hurt more?

Was it me, for trying, attempting,
Accepting advanced rejection
In hopes of maybe, some day,
Gaining your affection?

Or was it you, for going after
Someone that poured their heart out
Even though the same type
Was left alone, here to shout?

You ran to me for advice
When the world turned a cold shoulder
I smiled, put you in her shoes
Telling you to hug and hold her

Saying that if I was that girl
That waited for so long
And swore to take a bullet
How could anything go wrong?

Joking about how much she loves you
Sadly, in a way, I'm that same girl,
I let her try on my shoes
That's the reason why it hurts

You see, I handed my shoes
Over to her on loan
I wanted her to have a chance
To see you when she gets home

It should be me wearing those shoes
I had them first; they're mine
Some twisted Cinderella fairytale
That's spoiled over time

She's my step sis, sweetly asking
To try them on just once
I can't wait 'till Prince Charming
Finds out that she's a dunce

I'm thinking about giving up
Locked inside this pantry
Right now you're on a date
So no Prince Charming can save me

I think I should have given up
A long time ago
I tried to sound my feelings out
But now you'll never know

I told you that I liked you
You thought it was a hoax
But now the joke's on you
My love was just false hope

I chased you for three sweet years
But you never turned an eye
So now, the time has come to say
I think this is goodbye

Your girl is calling on the phone
You might want to pick up
Please talk after I already go
I think I've had enough

I'm tired of your girlfriend
She's wearing out my shoes
To love someone that's taken
Please tell me, what's the use?

I cried and screamed for many days
And yet, I hooked you up
You don't like her, but you let her say
The two of you are in love

It breaks my heart to know that
Friends think you two are on
The same page, for I know that
They can't tell that they are wrong

I'm sorry, but I love you
It's too much to deny
But I cannot blame myself
Those shoes are really mine

_____
I loved you first.

Punkrock Princess

Every reason effects me to be rebel
I don't wait my love to define
Stylish chicks aren't a friend of mine
And I feel like a punkrock princess

No way to be similar with any popular girl
I won't try to make you sweat or act like stupid
Don't think i'm just an easy girl you can sleep with
I'm nothing but a punkrock princess

I will shake my hair,feel the rhytm in your head
The electric guitar voice makes love to your brain
Rock is my all,it's the blood floods in my vein
I will forever be a punkrock princess

-FoReVeR RoCk----
Hope you like it!
lol

ooooooooooooooooooo abandoned!
thx so much
luv gabriella

abandoned

i stand here in the headlights
looking all around
im too scared to scream
from where i stand here on the ground

the car starts moving away
i whisper my goodbyes
the lights staring straight ahead
blinding in my eyes

it speeds of into the distance
swerving to the side
i crouch here in the dirt
having nowhere left to hide

i reach out as if to touch them
the rain washing away my tears
but the only people i've ever known walk away
and leave me with my fears

i stand here in the darkness
it hurts to be so lonely
so hard to be abandoned
and the people walk around me

there ya go!

I miss you Daddy

Salt and Pepper hair
Skin tanned by the sun
Distinguished man
Of about six-one

Little crooked smile
Eyes of Hazel Green
Weight about 180
He was tall and lean

Things that I remember
Most about my dad
He was always there
When I was feeling sad

Manners and morals
Words to live by
Chin up, walk proud
Always question why

Unconditional love
Never being biased
Say what you mean
Always show trust

Calloused hands
With a tender touch
He loved his children
So very much

I miss my daddy
More every day
And I miss him more
than words convey

Happy Birthday Daddy
3/15/42-12/29/94
Melinda Kay Smith
(Dixie)

Hope this is ok.

Trapped Inside My Mind

Here you are, even when you are gone,
Here you stay to all hours after dawn.
Here you smile, here I finally feel good,
Here I feel I special, the way I should.

You are here, trapped inside my mind,
If only there were a key that I could find.
To unlock the door and let you free,
But wherever I go, you remain with me.

You said we were through. My mind disagrees,
You filled it with love and meant-to-be’s.
Now I can’t let you go, no matter what I do,
My mind and I are head over heals for you.

Even as you left, I thought of the past,
Remembering you said we’d forever last.
Never again will I feel that I’ll be alone forever…
As long as I have my mind…we’re still together.

~*Who Cares?*~

most the poems be new ones or r old ones on the topic ok? can more then 1 poet take the same topic? can poets enter more than 1 poem?

no more then one poem and differtent topics plz

ok all of these were excellent poems it was hard to decide but I pick Gabriella!! it rocked nice job!

second goes to dixie daisy

third goes to broken

fourth is wastedfakesmiles

yay 4th!:D

congrats to the winners

Thank you for second and also thank you for the comments on the poems. It is much appreciated. Thanks for a wonderful inspiration to write the words to my daddy.

thanks so much kaila!
i didn't think i would even make it in.
;0
luv gabriella

through your eyes

the look that i see have become so different,
the way you and me talk is not the same,
you seem to be so far and so distant,
you don't seem to care when i call your name.

i look through your eyes and see all your lies,
why can't you come and pretend it alright,
just tell me the truth and look in my eyes,
lets go back, back to that night.

can't you see that i'm here for you,
i have to much to say,
i don't have time for all your games, but i love you too,
i just want to go back in your arms and together we're lay.

^^ hun, the contest is over...

Ciao