Help, unsure with this genra

i'v tried my writing with a music genra i like, which is powermetal but im unsure if it works with my style and would like people, if they have the spare time, to have a read and give feedback on it, its called "Darkness Apon Us" i will rate and comment on peole who help me with this as a way to say thanks

and help, positive or negative is welcome ,we all learn from mistakes
thanks to you all
see ya