i cant understand, god

i just wrote this poem because another friend of mine just lost her baby and i need to know what this pom needs, please comment dont vote i dont care about those ,but please help me make this perfect..
1 for 3 if i have to

please help me with this

okay, i commented on it, it was gorgeous, im so sorry for your friend, plz do whichever of mine you want, thx so much
luv gabriella

thank you i am of to do both of your guy's poems thank you both

done with em, i am still looking for other help if you got it,
nessa