4 for 9

ok i have four newer poems that i ike and i would like you to give me any help you can on making them better. i will rrc 9 of your poems if you do these 4 of mine and you
* dont leave one liners
* dont go on and on about grammer, i know i need to fix the grammer in all of my poems,
thank you O and you HAVE to LEAVE TITLES or LINKS i dont want to pick,

sorry for being picky, and thanks,
nessa

god gave me a son
http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/special/poems.php?id=859866

things i wont tell you
http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/sad/poems.php?id=859831

change
http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/sad/poems.php?id=859816

my last prayer for you
http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/sad/poems.php?id=859793

i'd recommend 'Change.'