Triple Comments [KRISTEN.]
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xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex
18 years agoI really enjoyed all these poems. Thank you so much for the sharing of them. I'm sorry I couldn't comment half, and I understand if you don't want to do the triple comments.
Anyways, how many do I get? =] 18? That seems crazy . . . Is that right? =/ Um, just tell me so I can list the titles for you? Thanks doll . . .
I Just Wish You Could See
[I'm sorry, I can't comment friendship poems,
but if I could, I would say:]
"Your friendship poem was so touching. I can completely understand the feeling of wanting to help them find self-worth. There are a lot of great people out there that need to know how much they mean to just one person. It's great to know that your friend has you to do that. =]"
[If you don't want to give a comment back in return, I certainly understand. I voted it a five. One of best friendship poems I've ever had the pleasure of reading. =] ]
Dear You, From Me [Cinquain]
[And again, I can't comment love poems, so if you don't want to return the favor, I completely understand. I gave it a five. =] ]
"Awee! This is the sweetest thing! I know it's short, but I have a hard time liking ANY love poems I read. Even some of Darien's I if at. Why? Because it's impossible to explain love, thus impossible to explain how one may feel. But, as humans, we do try. And as a human, you did absolutely amazing. As always. Your love poems always seem to be
my favorite over many other love poems. Thank you so much for sharing. =] "
Completed Heart [Etheree]
"Again, I suggest commas and periods. It will really] help the flow. Don't take me as bashing your poetry, but it really helps.=/ Please don't get mad . . . Anyways, great use of discription here. Beautiful,as always. I don't like the use of 'tummy',
though. =/ Thanks for the share. Definate five."
And we're done. I hope it's ok I gave the comments here. =]
My Poems [If you want =] ]:
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