Do i really write like a six year old?

Please check out my work (gee, i hope i it's not true)
And tell me whether or not i really write like a 6 year old...

No you don't write like a six year old. You write like a sixteen year old, which is your age I think. You write like you're writing a song not a poem which is the perfect way to do it. I write that way myself, if it was good enough for Frost and Poe its damned well good enough for me. Anyone says you write like a six year old clearly thinks themself above you and as such are the only six year old in the conversation.

Write for yourself, **** anyone elses opinions.
A good poet knows all words are beautiful in any way shape or form.

Drusus

If a six year old could write like that he/she's be famous!!

But no, you write like your age, if that means anything these days.
Seriously though, don't let any of it put you down, just keep writing.

thank you!