doubled comments for "A Day with Jake" plz!

sequel to the first poem I wrote about this subject called "Letters to Jake"

very emotional and deep subject for me...any sort of criticism is appreciated! :)

and i will double your comment and match any other comments you do for any other poems after that!

please and thank you!

i`m going to do it right now :D

done... oh my goodness i can even explain to you how much i LOVED that poem... great job :D

can you please r/r/c

- no longer a home
- memories of you

lol...except you didnt do it

Done-- please do my newest, thanks!

yes i did i commetned "a letter to jake" i know you asked us to comemnt "letters to jake" but there was no such poem as that so i did "a letter to jake" because i just figured it was a mistake..

also i didnt comment the poem "a day with jake" because that is the title... and not specifaclly what you asked for in your post

here is the omment.....

becca ♥ ( F P C D ) at 2007-03-28

Oh my gosh i have goosebumps... the simplicity of the words and structure put so much focus on what your really trying to say.. the emotion is so strong and every repeated line screams that... no suggestions... i am schocked... the rating is a 3.9 and i did not expect such a beautiful poem... i`ll vote 5 to help you out because i LOVE LOVE LOVE this poem :D