PLEASE HELP

Hey what do ya'll think of this poem. im not sure, and i dont know how to end it yet.

Where do you go
When no one is there
When everyone's gone
And it seems like they dont care

Where do you go
When you're by yourself
Who do you turn to
When everyone thinks about themselves

Where do you go
When you cant go home
No one understands
They dont see you're alone

Where do you go
When your friends dont have time
They are to busy to help you
Even though you are in a bind

Where do you go
When you have no one in whom you confide
Left alonde with your feelings
Sometimes you think it'd be better if you died

Where do you go
To let it all out
Where do you go
To just scream and shout

Where do you go
To the one whom you can tell all
Who's there for you
And will hold you when you bawl

Where do you go
To you notebook and write it all down
Not letting people know how you feel
You put on a smile to hide the frown

but it doesnt seem like it is done, i feel like it needs sum thing but i dont know what or how to write it

i like it its really good and youre rite it doesn't seem finished um to finish it i would answer the quesiton like ur askin where do you go and you should answer it as and ending. thats my oponion but it still really good

What do you mean it sounds like every other thing on this site? how do other things sound?

exuse me but people commiting suicide isn't something you bla bla bla to about thank you very much my best friend commited suicide and it isn't funny to me i think you should watch you're mouth when you joke about things like that

all i can say is that my smile is already broken you fuken son of a bitch

just to let you know... this poems isnt about me... ok, but i do apperciate your comments on it. thank you. i guess i will have to read some of your poems, and see what u like to read about. thank you though.

Geez ppl why such hostitily why cant we jus get along?

I think i got it but im not sure, i worked on it last night,

Where do you go
When no one is there
When everyone's gone
And it seems like they dont care

Where do you go
When you're by yourself
Who do you turn to
When everyone thinks about themselves

Where do you go
When you cant go home
No one understands
They dont see you're alone

Where do you go
When your friends dont have time
They are to busy to help you
Even though you are in a bind

Where do you go
When you have no one in whom you confide
Left alonde with your feelings
Sometimes you think it'd be better if you died

Where do you go
To the one whom you can tell all
Who's there for you
And will hold you when you bawl

Where do you go
To you notebook and write it all down
Not letting people know how you feel
You put on a smile to hide the frown

Where do you go
To let it all out
Where do you go
To just scream and shout

Where do you go
When no one is there
When everyone's gone
Leaving you with this load to bear.

How does that sound.