[[Blarh. Good Deals.]]

Blarh. That's all I have to say.
I wrote three new poems and they immediately get downrated.
So, your mission is to tell me WHY they got downrated. [I think someone is jealous of me here, but just incase. . .]

SO.
The deal.

If You Read Nothing Else, Read This:
01. Read the poem thoroughly.
02. Give honest critic.
03. NO one liners. I'll shoot you. [[Lmao.]]
04. Tell me how many poems you did and I'll do that many plus two. [[I give honest, harsh critic.]]

Thanks!
[[Keep in mind: I'm on Spring Break, so I WILL get comments.]]

xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

I only did the one...but I may go back for more at a later date....

Can you return the favour on any of my recent ones please.

I did one.
Commented honestly.

You can choose any of mine.
And if you don't wanna do that just say and I'll list some to choose from =P

Well done by the way. =)

Blarh...
Can you guys leave titles? I hate randomly searching. =/ Thank you.

xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

"An eye for an eye"
"Forevers gone"
&
"senses"

Please & Thank you.