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Please r/r/c my latest poem
- no longer a home

*** if you leave a "good" comment i will comment back on 3 poems, a GOOD COMMENT TO MEANS... it includes constructive criticism and explanations as to why you like or dislike.. the poem as a whole, or parts of it

* if you leave one liners expect one liners

I'll do it
you can do anyones youd like

I r/r/c your poem.
Could you please r/r/c on
- Satisfaction I'll never give you
- If you
- memory lane

Please & thank you.