Creeping Once Again----> PLease read

  • KeyxMashingxParody
    18 years ago

    My newest poems, My Tomb, We're going down, and Creeping once again, are filled with my emotions and feelings, and I would appreciate some comments please.

    -Liz-
    ps: don't forget to leave me something to read also! ^-^
    I enjoy reading ya'll's poems!

  • HOLLYWOODxBANGBANG
    18 years ago

    Okay I will read those.

    A Silhouette In The Sailor's Sky [Villonnet]

    &&

    If LIfe Is Twice As Pretty Once You're Dead.

    Thanks! (:

  • MaSkEdSoUl
    18 years ago

    Hey your poems were good, great emotion in them

    Can you please do these:

    Hidden Feelings
    Lovely Girl
    & Loneliness (its one of my old ones)

  • KeyxMashingxParody
    18 years ago

    I rated both and commented one, but the love poem did not let me comment Lush, sorry, but they were both phenominal. You're very talented.

    -Liz-

  • KeyxMashingxParody
    18 years ago

    BoBa, your words are soft, your heart is divine. I've never seen such a soul. Keep it up, 5/5 for all.

    -Liz-