SoSickOfTear's Contest Number 3!!

CLOSED FOR JUDGING! CLOSED FOR JUDGING!
~Rules~
Must reserve
Can be about anything as long as it is HAPPY
Must rhyme
Must be NEW

Prizes:
1st Place-7comments, votes
2nd Place-5 comments
3rd place-3 comments

Closing Date:
30th April 2007

Have fun!
xxx

Lie To mE Please
Thanks alot

I will do Once More, With Feeling.

Ok. This is the thing.
I'm writing a poem that I want to call "You Might Want To Help/Hold Her" [undecided at that point.] But, anyways, I could retitle it "Never Leave Me" and incorrporate a little of that into. So, it wouldn't be the forever title of the piece, but it will have to do with the "Never Leave Me" title.

Is that ok? And did that make sense? =/

If so, I'll take "Never Leave Me."

xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

Yep, that's fine!!

Nevermind!

=]

^^damn you Lauren!!! I wanted that one! haha :)

Ciao~

Can I have, "The Gift", please? Thanks!

Lover's Walk,Si vous plait *In english: Please*

-AOTD/Kurt

Lover's Walk

We stroll along through the trees
Our hands clasped together
I know we are thinking the same thing,
"I wish this would last forever"

The grass beneath our feet
Slowly shifts to sand
We continue our conversation
Ignoring the difference in the land

We continue our journey
Through the forest park
Holding hands and laughing
Until the world goes dark

The winding path disappears
Leading us to rugged brush
You say "I think we are lost"
And you start to blush

Once again the trail is found
Yet we begin to move aside
Our lips met for moments
With passion not denied

Then you pull me along
And continue to talk
I realize that our stroll
Has become a lover's walk

The Gift

The gift you've given me
Is that of the sun
The light brightens my mind
And makes me feel as though I've won

The gift you've given me
Is that of hope
It gives me strength
To take problms, and cope

The gift you've given me
Is that of grace
It takes away the sadness
And rests it in a better place

The gift you've given me
Is that of wonder
I often appear lost in it
No longer afraid of a blunder

The gift you've given me
Is that of love
You've made me realize
You are my guiding dove

Angel please =)

L o v e x3

Ahh.. you can have it. i unreserve because i missed the whole-must be Happy thing.. it was not goign to be happy.. lol

Thank you ((I was l o v e)) appreciate it! Please reserve me!!

Ciao~

I call "I was made to love you"

Erika thats taken..

I Was Made To Love You

I told you that i loved you and i meant it
You are the one that i want to be with
When the stars fall out of the sky
I still want to lay my head on your chest and know that youre mine

You know baby, when we're both wrinkly and old
you'll still be the only one that i want to hold
Hold you close to me and feeling you breath
you know that is where i want to be

Never forget that your my nirvana
And me finding you was due to good karma
when i meet your eyes and your lips feel so soft
you make my mind and my body feel so aloft

i never want to let you go
but some day we will both leave and i want you to know
that when we leave to go up to the gods
the path of the loving is where we will trod

I hope that it is ok. i dont often write poems that rhyme. thank you for letting me try anyways

Plz reserve me, "When She Was Bad". Thanks :)

Due to people reserving the same title, I shall change the rules, there can be two poets to a title, but no more.
xxx

Lie To Me

Wind kicks a leaf out of the heated ground
Flowers give up licking their wound
Summer is leaving for the cheerless fall
Lie to me again but don't leave me my all

Rain starts to pour suddenly just like my tears
Horrible lightnings come out with endless fears
All the trees shaking,scared by the power of above
Lie to me but don't be the reason why i cry my love

Snow uses a white paint on all the street
Cold tickles your skin,feeling no discreet
A violet loses his love under that heavyness
Lie to me but don't ever lose me my sweetness

Sun waves back with a brightness to all the alive
Flowers are enjoying this happy day now they live
Mother bug gives birth although the old the better
Lie to me but don't ever replace me with any other

Waves of sea tries so hard to make people come
Lovers tumble on sands waving passion welcome
Flowers pale and wither with lack of tenderness
Lie to me but don't let me fade my only happiness

Days,months,years passed just like a second
Waves cleared my hopes,regrets in me deepened
If only you could give me a hand from sky flyin
Lie to me but let me be the rose on your coffin

hope it's alright
xxxxxxxxxx

Can i reserve the surprise? thanks

Curses. Never mind.

xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

I'll unreserve Made to love you... someone already did it, and I have a lot of other things to do.. No worries! :) Good Luck All!

Ciao~

I unreserve surprise, now since finding out we can have two poet per title Ill reserve once more with feelings

Once More With Feelings
-victoria-

Tell me
Tell me
Once more with feelings
That you love me
With all your heart
Looking at me is a start

Come out with it
And just speak
Once more
With feelings

Tell me
Everything will be alright
Tell me
Please, don't confide

I dig deep down inside
Into your vacant eyes
And search for that man before
Who always loved me and asked for more
lovin

Tell me
once more with feelings
That you love me
Don't keep a secret

Scream and shout
If you have to
Tell me
That all I want you to do

Tell me once more with more feelings
Tell me that u love me
Tell me
Im the one you wanna be
with

Out with it
Once more with feelings
Love me with desire
Love me with fire
Tell me
Don't hide
and Don't confide

.....

"I love you with all my heart
By opening up to you is a start
I want to love you with desire
I love you with fire
You are who I wanna be with
Im gonna come out with it
I have nothing to hide
Nothing to confide
I love you..."

I hope this sound good and I hope u guys who read this understands.. What I mean.. hopefully

When She Was Bad (4 Rondelets)

When she was bad
Everything would seem to hurt her
When she was bad
Attacking those who caused her pain
Beaten up by her own mother
Covering scars that showed her hurt
When she was bad

She cried last night
At school, nobody else could see
She cried last night
She and mom got into a fight
Having reached the last boundary
Kicked into the street, no fright
It's feels so hard to see the light
She cried last night

It's not that bad
She wakes up on her granite sheet
It's not that bad
Abandoned by her mom and dad
Doing drugs, stealing money, cheat
Sells her body to survive living on the street
It's not that bad

Five years later
Living in a nice home indoors
Five years later
There is no more need to hate her
No need to steal money; she's not poor
New 'rents; not hurting anymore
Five years later

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The Rondelet is a brief French form of poetry. It consists of one stanza, made up of seven lines. It contains a refrain, a strict rhyme scheme and a distinct meter pattern. The rhyme scheme is AbAbbA.

^^^ does that count as happy b/c of the ending?

Can I reserve Never Leave Me please?

SingingInTheRain-Yep, that's fine!
xxx

I've done my thing hun..but err...it'S not happy at all...if it really annoys you.. then count me out..i just didn't see that happy thing bafore i wrote it...it's at the little upside of here...scrooll up if you want to see it

Never Leave Me (Palindrome)

Never Leave Me
Prince Charming
Lover and friend forever
Handsome, sexy, caring, sweet
Treasured memories, romantic moments
Enchanting and divine
Never Forget

***** Mirror Image *****

Forget never
Divine and Enchanting
Moments romantic, memories treasured
Sweet, caring, sexy, handsome
Forever Friend and Lover
Charming Prince
Me leave, Never!

Palindrome - Also Known as Mirrored Poetry. A palindrome, by definition, is a word, phrase, verse, sentence, or even poem that reads the same forward or backward. The carefully placed words form the same sentence, whether it is read forward or backward. For example, 'Mirrored images reflect images mirrored' which includes a word in the centre as a reversal point for the sentence or even the poem.

PrettyInPunk[LauRa]:
I'm sorry, I can't accept that as it isn't happy, I would love too, but I don't think it would be fair to change the rules now when people have already entered.
However, I would love you to have another go, you have a lot of talent and it would be a shame to waste it.
xx

Umm..then i would give 'Bad Girls' a try
Hope i can do it...*smiles*
And thanks although i don't believe it myself
Have a nice day hun
Laura

Can I reserve "Surprise", please?

Damn, sorry, but I'm gonna have to pull out.

A relative just passed away, and I'm finding it way too difficult to concentrate on anything at the moment. I'm also out a lot, and extremely busy, so I don't think I'd have time to complete this.

I'm sorry.

Once More, With Feeling

Just one more time, that is the key
So I know that you do not lie
When you say you'll always love me
Because I do not want to cry
Kiss me once more
Before we depart
Into other worlds with terrible horror
I want to feel your lips of art
Once more, with feeling
That's all I ask
I want my heart not have to heal
Come on, it's just one little task
Our hearts combined
We will be one
Kiss me so our love won't be blind
That last one was cold and without sun
Once more, with feeling
I don't want to regret
That you've been concealing
Since the day that we had met
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This really sucks. But hey, don' t all of mine?

Ugh, because I love the title sooo much... I came back and I'll re-reserve I Was Made To Love You... I'm writing it now..

xxCiaoxx

Xx Angels - Terzanelle xX

Spreading love across the land
Angels dance and sweetly sing
Spreading love across the land

Tranquil tenderness they always bring
Reaching deep into each soul
Angels dance and sweetly sing

They show us how we can enroll
And find a place where true lies
Reaching deep into the soul

They come to earth in a disguise
They help us to find our melody
And find a place where true love lies

They pick us up from the debris
Helping us find the love in life
They help us to find our melody

Protecting us from pain and strife
Helping us find the love in life
Spreading love across the land
Spreading love across the land

*Gem*

Copyright©GemmaStott2007
04.34pm

(The Terzanelle is a poetry type which is a combination of the villanelle and the Terza Rima forms. It is a 19-line poem consisting of five interlocking triplets/tercets plus a concluding quatrain in which the first and third lines of the first triplet appear as refrains. The middle line of each triplet is a repetend reappearing as the last line of the succeeding triplet with the exception of the centre line of the next-to-the-last stanza which appears in the quatrain.)

I Was Made To Love You

6 months ago, I couldn't believe my eyes-
a wonderful feeling. attached to a great guy.
My friends said that I was blinded from the start;
but I knew it was right, from the bottom of my heart.

Through the winter and before, the fall,
we had each other, for it all.
No matter what life threw our way,
we knew together is where we'd stay.

Through rumors and teasing, it never did end;
you were always there; my best friend.
You never left me when times got tough-
because we went through the exact same stuff.

Holding hands and kisses between each class
proved to me that our love would last.
Warm hugs and many reluctant goodbyes-
all covered up with lust-filled sighs.

No one would believe that we're still together;
I guess they don't know the meaning of 'forever'.
I know in years to come, it will always be us two-
because Baby, I Was Made To Love You.

Can I please have "Lie To Me"?

Thanks

Josie