'Let Us' - New Poem.

OKOK. I admit I haven't written in so long, so don't be to harsh on it. I don't appreciate the down voting so if you are going to vote it cause you don't like it, then don't bother. I never down vote if the poem isn't something I like I don't let it effect me giving you a 5.

You must leave ONE poem title, or I will not comment back. I don't want "My Newest poem" or "Pick any you like." nothing like that. Leave the title.

I would love to read your poems, I won't do a downer vote, don't worry. But if you can, could you please read, rate and comment 2 of my latest poems

"Story" and "Ticking Clock"

thanks alot:)

Alissa

I only did one since you only did one of mine.

**NOTE**

If anyone is posting you can pick from either.
"Let Us" OR "Perfectionistical."
You can do one or both it's up too you.
If you do one I will do one poem for you.
If you do both. I'll do two poems for you.
Lol, and so on. Just don't forget to leave your titles.

I did your 'let us' poem.
could you do
- His love for her is gone

Thank you. Done.
Anyone else?

Read: Forest Fire

Please and thank you :)

Alyson

Done. Anyone else?