New Style, R/R/C please

Hey,
I have been trying out a new style and I would love to have some input on it. Please read, rate and comment my newest poems
\"Story\" and \"Ticking Clock\"

Well thanks alot, and if you comment, I\'m sure to do the same!

Alissa:)

P.S.
It may not be that good, so if you want to read my emotional poems, read \"you could call it murder\" or any of the rest.
Thanks alot again!!