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-Hey,

I could really use some advice for "A hand for a quill". I have a few comments and ratings but I really want to know what needs to be worked on to improve flow. Whether or not the poem ends in a confusing matter etc. I will return the favor in double. *Warning* My comments can be brutal when i'm really honest. Post which poems you'd like commented and how honest you want me to be.

-AOTD/Kurt

I will do it Tomorrow.

When it rains Today: not my best but be honest

When Silence Cease (Free-style): Be honest

Alright thanks, I got both of you. Great poems by the way.

-AOTD/Kurt