Babylon {Ode}

I feel this is my best written love poem. I had four qualify for the "Best Love Poems Of All Time" thing, but I feel this one is so much more worthy.
I'd be honored if you helped me reach my goal.
However, I want your HONEST opinion. I don't want any favors of fives just so you'll get it back.
Give a honest comment and honest vote. Thank you.

Oh. The favor will be returned if you leave titles. No love or frienship, and for the sake of god, no one line comments.
Thank you for your time. =]

xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

Oh. My. Anyone? =[