Mountain dew's Contest

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Rules:
1- Chose a title and request
2- Titles are NOT limited to one per person
3- Can chose 2 different titles per person
4- More then 8 lines
5- Must be new
6- Doesn't have to rhyme
7- Must be creative
(I'm into more sad poems but any are good)

Titles:
1- Invisible - Britt
2- Save My Life- Infected With his Deadly Love (?)
3- Good Enough- SingingInTheRain
4- Superman-xXRomancing the darker sidexX
5- Behind Those/These Eyes- Sandra D
6- Misunderstood- Victoria Rainey
7- Complicated-Victoria Rainey & Racheal
8- Breakdown-xXRomancing the darker sidexX
9- Fly Away - *Gem*

Prizes:
1-6 r/r/c
2-5 r/r/c
3-4 r/r/c
4-3 r/r/c
5-2 r/r/c
everyone else gets 1 r/r/c

Contest Ends:(edit) When all entries are in

Who is done?
Gem (1)
xXRomancing the darker sidexX (2)
Victoria Rainey (2)
Britt (1)
Sandra D (1)
Racheal (1)
SingingInTheRain (1)

Can i try 'behind these eyes' plz?

does it have to rhyme?

No doesn't have to rhyme i'm adding that to the rules

Reserve me Right Now.. I'll try that...

Ciao~

Fly Away!!

(Is it ok to shorten the title to fly? Just need to check, it;s ok if not =)

Xx Fly xX

Fly, fly. Now is the time
Fly to where the stars all shine
Fly upon the gently breeze
Soar above the lakes and trees

Fly, fly. On winds of love
Fly beside the graceful dove
Fly away to the unknown
Always remember, your not alone

Fly, fly. Towards the sun
Fly, your journey has begun
Fly untroubled from the pain
No need to feel sadness again

Fly, fly. Spread your wings
Fly to where the angels sing
Fly away at your own pace
Your on course to a better place

Fly, fly. Your finally free
Fly across the land and sea
Fly, fly. Towards the light
Go now, the time is right

*Gem*
Copyright©GemmaStott2007

(Interpret this poem how you will x)

(I can change the title if you want =)

Great job gem =]

ok i've updated the names

i'll be waiting for more

much love and good luck

brittany (MD)

Complicated and misunderstood please!! By the way I LOVE MOUNTAIN DEW!!! lol jk

May I have Superman please? Thanks. :)

You were my Superman
My real-life action hero
You filled me up with joy
So I would never hit zero

You told me I was pretty
Beautiful, in fact
Then one day you just stopped
Because I didn't love you back

Now you're onto someone new
Yet they swears you still care
Could I have you this one time?
Couldn't this just be fair?

I thought I hated you
The fact was that I didn't understand
I'd never been in love before
But you were my Superman

Plz reserve me, "Good Enough." thanx :)

Complicated

So complicated
So sophisticated
So elaborate
So intricate
I can list the words to describe
The realationship
Between you and I
When I look at you
You look away
When I talk
There's nothing to say
I touch your hand
You pull away
You hide from me
Just like any other day
I dig so deep
Into your heart
Just hoping someday you'll see
How much I love you
No matter how much you put me through
So labyrinthine
So Byzantine
All the complicated words
Im not mad, Im just hurt
Someday our realationship
Will be these words
So comprehensible
So conceivable
So apprehensible
So graspable
Only if I could just tell you
How much I feel about you
How much I really do love you
But the question is
Do you?
Our realationship, what is it?
I ask myself that everyday
Since the day I never heard you say
I love you
Like the way I do
Our realationship
So CoMpLiCaTeD

Hope you all like this...:)

May I also have Breakdown? Thank you!

Breakdown
What I experience every night
What drives me out of the light
That shines so softly
Illuminating my night

Breakdown
The thing I go through every day
The evil that drives you away
It creeps like a stalker
As I continue to pray

Breakdown
The one thing that doesn't understand
That all I want is a friend's hand
To hold in my own
Turning my heart to sand

Breakdown
The action-turned-emotion
That leaves you gasping for my motion
It makes you think deeply
And I express my every notion

Breakdown
The sin, the hurt,the ultimate pain
More evil than Satan, more depressing than rain
Pouring down into your soul
This breakdown will soon drive me insane

MiStUnDeRsToOd

Just rollin on the floor
Giggling and laughing
Over a guy we adore
Ate cookies and milk all night long
We always got along
Chatting one day
Then things got carried away
We ended in a fight
The girl who was my best friend
was the girl I despised
No more late calls
No more laughing
A misunderstood ripped it all
Our hearts
Our friendship
A separated life is at a start
No more cookies and milk
No more dressing up
In cotton and silk
All because
Of one misunderstanding
Her and I
Wondering who was the one
That misunderstood
Gone
Just like our hearts
And our friendship
Ending and Fading
To pieces and bits
All because I started dating
Our friendship
Didn't go as well as it should
All because I MISUNDERSTOOD

Uhh I tried my best on the poem .. but hey.. at least I tried it probably sucks anyway

How do you set up a contest anyway ???

Nvm.. i just had a dumb blonde moment.. so nvm me...

Anyone for atrophy or novocaine? those 2 have no takers but anyone can still have the others also....if no one will claim them i can make 2 more

Aww any otheresss?

Maybe change the other two titles.. as my suggestions maybe to something much easier... lol :)

Ok i changed the first 2 titles now any takers?

La de da de da i'm hyper anyone want to enter????

la de da

brittany (MD)

I would.. but I already finished two poems...:(

I'll have Save my life.

Only 1 more that hasn't been taken =/ anyone wanna take it?

You'll take invisible?

Ok correct me if i am wrong on this but im not bumping this i am simply stating that

Contest Ends tommorrow and i need the rest of my participants to send me in their poems pleaseeee

thanks a bunch ~MD

Uh, please unreserve me... I have too much going on... sorry Brit

Ciao~

Done! mwahahaha!

*~Behind Those Eyes~*

Behind those eyes
Is a heart longing for love
Tired of all the goodbyes

Behind those eyes
Is someone wanting to get away
Tired of all the lies

Behind those eyes
Is a soul screaming out for help
Tired of all the unheard cries

Behind those eyes
Is a girl finally giving up
Tired of all her tries

Ok fine i'm changing the ending date untill i get all my poems in and people unreserve if they don't want it anymore and i need to fill one more space

PLEASEEEEE
&&&
THANKIESS

(MD)

Sorry I forgot I reserved.
I will try and get done asap.

Good Enough

Out of everything about you,
The sadness, failed attempts,
I do not wish to doubt you,
Until nothing is left.

Your eyes, a golden brown,
That flash with every stare,
From every smile to frown,
You make me know you care.

Sometimes, you do listen,
At times, you want to speak,
From all the facts you've given,
My knees have grown so weak.

I spend hours wanting, missing you,
I wish I had your love,
But when you are right next to me,
This moment's good enough.

Ok this is def. closed now, im gonna judge right now i will post results in a little bit sorry for anyone who didn't get their poem in on time i gave a whole extra week

Results:

Prizes:
1-6 r/r/c Victoria Rainey- Complicated
2-5 r/r/c- Gem-Fly
3-4 r/r/c- xXRomancing the darker sidexX- Superman
4-3 r/r/c SingingInTheRain- Good Enough
5-2 r/r/c- Sandra D - Behind Those Eyes
everyone else gets 1 r/r/c

Thanks for everyone who participated, it was really really really hard to decide i had to take it to at least 5 people to decide Thanks to everyone

brittany (MD)

Excellent. Just my latest 5 please =)

Please r/c/v

Break Me,
Sometimes, in My Head,

...and....

A Moment of Silence.

Thank you!

Any 2 of mine would be just wonderful, thanx so much!

YEA!! thanks.. just whatever catches ur eyes! thanks!