If anyone speaks espanol. :)

I wrote two poems in spanish, and I was wondering if anyone out there who speaks the language could comment. Just to see if it came out okay/if I have wording or grammatical errors. Thanks much. Will return comments and votes x2. :)

Im off to do them right now! I'm not gonna comment in spanish though is that ok? only if I'll correct something lol. And where are you from? I'm half Nicaraguan

Lol, that's fine. I'm from USA. Born american and all that... but in a highschool spanish class and trying to practice. :) Thank you so much for the comments! Is there anything of yours you would like commented in return?