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  • BeautifulxMess
    18 years ago

    Confessions of a Broken Friendship
    ^recently written
    Erotic Allure
    ^Wrote last night.
    Please read, rate and comment those two poems. I'll return the favor with 4 poems of your choice. *NO one liners!!*
    *Please r/r/c the correct poems*
    *No explict poems*
    K Please rate and comment.
    Please tlel me if there's any errors in the poem.
    HONEST COMMENTS PLEASE!
    <3Tayyyy

  • BeautifulxMess
    18 years ago

    Anyone?

  • KeyxMashingxParody
    18 years ago

    SOME ONE GET IN HERE AND READ HER POETRY OR I'MA GET MICHEAL JACKSON ON YA'LL!!!!! =P im serious! haha

    -Liz-

    keep up the good writing chicky. =~.^=

  • AlaSkA
    18 years ago

    Im down. gettin on it.

    why we make collect calls and wear overcoats
    checkmate
    geometry
    and your chouice of the last one.. you dont have to do 4 if you dont want to. (:

    Tom

  • KeyxMashingxParody
    18 years ago

    Hey, could either of you read one more of mine for me!?
    =D
    (well a few more, some of my first poems!!!!!! hehe) please

  • BeautifulxMess
    18 years ago

    Okay tom I'll do yours.

  • BeautifulxMess
    18 years ago

    Done with yours.
    Anyone else? Pleaseee :D

  • Goran Rahim
    18 years ago

    I will check them out, u can do my recent ones if u want to,tnx

  • BeautifulxMess
    18 years ago

    Of course Goran right away.

  • BeautifulxMess
    18 years ago

    Done with Goran's.
    Anyone else?

  • Goran Rahim
    18 years ago

    Thanks alot, since your poems are so nice im reading some more taht u do not have to return favor or anything, it is just taht i love reading them, you are truly a great writer.

  • BeautifulxMess
    18 years ago

    Thanks..ok please..anyone else?
    2 for 4!
    If I don't get to yours today, I will do yours tomorow.