2 for 4 Honest Comments

Confessions of a Broken Friendship
^recently written
Erotic Allure
^Wrote last night.
Please read, rate and comment those two poems. I'll return the favor with 4 poems of your choice. *NO one liners!!*
*Please r/r/c the correct poems*
*No explict poems*
K Please rate and comment.
Please tlel me if there's any errors in the poem.
HONEST COMMENTS PLEASE!
<3Tayyyy

Anyone?

SOME ONE GET IN HERE AND READ HER POETRY OR I'MA GET MICHEAL JACKSON ON YA'LL!!!!! =P im serious! haha

-Liz-

keep up the good writing chicky. =~.^=

Im down. gettin on it.

why we make collect calls and wear overcoats
checkmate
geometry
and your chouice of the last one.. you dont have to do 4 if you dont want to. (:

Tom

Hey, could either of you read one more of mine for me!?
=D
(well a few more, some of my first poems!!!!!! hehe) please

Okay tom I'll do yours.

Done with yours.
Anyone else? Pleaseee :D

I will check them out, u can do my recent ones if u want to,tnx

Of course Goran right away.

Done with Goran's.
Anyone else?

Thanks alot, since your poems are so nice im reading some more taht u do not have to return favor or anything, it is just taht i love reading them, you are truly a great writer.

Thanks..ok please..anyone else?
2 for 4!
If I don't get to yours today, I will do yours tomorow.