New Poem

Hey there people. I posted a new poem on here, that i'm actualy pretty proud of, but i havn't gotten any feedback on it, soo, feed back would be awesome, and i'll return the favour as soon as i can. The poem is You Are the Sun.
Thank yas =)

I hooked you up.

Awesome poem!
Please return with the poem
Confessions of a Broken Friendship.
and if you don't mind:
Before you also?
But if you don't want to do two, please do Confessions" "^^. Thankss :D
<3Tayy

Thank you both very much.
I liked your style of writing Tom, it makes you think about what your reading, very cool.
I did those two Tay, i like Before You alot, really beautiful.

thanks again =)

Wow that was a really good poem!
Can you please do Beauty or Tears?? which ever one you want!
Please and Thank You!!

Thanks BoBa =) i started commenting on yours before you responded here, so i did your poem love me for me too, i really liked that one. Thanks for commenting

Anytime ^_^