A good read!(it will keep you on your toes)

Ive got a poem that i would like to share with you folks.
its called : Checkmate. it doesnt have poetic meter, or rhyme shceme or stanza's. please do not downrate/think negativly twards it becouse of that. it is on purpose.

any rating/comment on this will be returned, ill look at what youve got or leave titles for me.

-Tom

No one?

I rated and commented your poem.
could you please r/r/c on my newest poem called "bitch"

Please & thank you.

Alright folks getting to your coments tonight.

anyone else?