Can anyone do some GOOD revising?

I'll come in and post a topic like, i'll rrc 5 poems for 1 GOOD review or critique on one of my featured poems, but a lot of the times all i get is,

"Great job, was pretty good, could feel how you feel you in this."

so Im lookin for someone who can give me a great critique on whats wrong and whats good in my poetry. So please, help me out here.

Sure. What poem?