3 for 6 first 5 people!!!!!!!!!!!

  • tyanna
    18 years ago

    If you r/r/c/ on three of my poems I'll do 6 of yours.. After the first 5 people it will go down to 2 for 3.....Remember to rate them also or the favor won't be returned!!! No one liners!!!!!!
    Tyanna

  • Lonesomeme
    18 years ago

    <<DONE>>

    any of my featured poems will be fine..I especially liked the poem titled eternal darkness...very profound and touching.

  • tyanna
    18 years ago

    Great poems!!!!I got all of your featured ones and was impressed by every singe one of them!!!!!!!
    ***********Anyone else????**********

  • tyanna
    18 years ago

    BTW...(unattractive1).. She wasn't there b/c she is an alcoholic/drug addict and choose my step dad over her kids...I talk about that in other poems and just didn't include that in this one..but just thought I'd let you know!

  • Lonesomeme
    18 years ago

    Oh awesome...lol...sorry, I didnt get a chance to read all of yours..I will be sure to go back and read them tho...thank you for the kind words...sometimes I find myself VERY humbled by other writers on here. I have been in a LOT of different english classes and even some poetry classes and I'd like to think I brought a few knowledgeable things away with me....I am not sure that is helped my actual writing topics but I know it helped me with descriptions and vocab...its all about imagination and using sensual words that will touch the reader in the right places...depending on which poem I am writing, depends on where I want to touch them....sad=heart, horror=fear, erotic=well, you know....happy writing!...-me

  • tyanna
    18 years ago

    Well I Was impressed!! You seem to have really learned a lot!! I haven't taken any classes or anything, and know very little about poetry..which is probably why I'm not that great. I just write down whatever is in my head that day...Sometimes it sounds alright and other times it makes no sence..lol... But you have amazing talent..I really liked the erotic poem..it was great!

  • tyanna
    18 years ago

    ?????????Anyone else???????????