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  • KeyxMashingxParody
    18 years ago

    Hey please rate and comment this one, and any others that catch your eye.
    Leave Titles For ME!!!!!!
    =)

    -Liz-
    ~muahs to all~

  • IdTakeABulletForYou
    18 years ago

    Dear, I don't drink wine...

    But I LOVE Karen, on Will & Grace.

    So I will do one of your poems in memory of Karen.

    =)

    BTW: Just check out the poem I am submitting shortly.

  • KeyxMashingxParody
    18 years ago

    Lol I love Will & Grace! hahaha Very funny. And it was actually budwiser, but it really didn't seem to fit the poem good. haha I'm just kidding, thank you, I will.

    -Liz-
    ~muahs to all~

  • Lonesomeme
    18 years ago

    <done!> great job! I enjoyed the read. Fell free to read "Taking advantage" or "Water Wonderland" or "To Be Loved in the Warmth of Your Own Bed" Thanks again...-unattractive1

  • KeyxMashingxParody
    18 years ago

    Sure thing hun. I'll get right to it, And Thank you for your comments, you too Stephen, and Thank you for the critcism, I must say, you are very outspoken. haha bye

    -Liz-
    ~muahs to all~

    ps: Stephen just leave the title, and I'll get back to you.

  • IdTakeABulletForYou
    18 years ago

    Http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/sad/poems.php?id=876362

    AKA- Penetration

    or any other one of mine if you aren't pleased with that.

    And dear, the only reason that I don't have a Platinum award for comments, just a mere silver one, is that though i don't give comments in bulk, they are extremely critical lol!

    Thank you and No Problem.

  • Lonesomeme
    18 years ago

    Ehhh...what is flay?....like to skin a fish?....lol

  • KeyxMashingxParody
    18 years ago

    Flaw, sry typo, i type fast. haha

  • Lonesomeme
    18 years ago

    Oh...you didnt see any flaws?...lol...trust me, they exist..lol...after reading some of the other poets on here...i am VERY humbled...although, i never really though I was any good before either lol.

  • KeyxMashingxParody
    18 years ago

    No, you're talented. The rhymes scheme was off at like two points, but I understood it, so 5/5

    -Liz-