KeyxMashingxParody
18 years ago
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Hey please rate and comment this one, and any others that catch your eye. |
IdTakeABulletForYou
18 years ago
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Dear, I don't drink wine... |
KeyxMashingxParody
18 years ago
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Lol I love Will & Grace! hahaha Very funny. And it was actually budwiser, but it really didn't seem to fit the poem good. haha I'm just kidding, thank you, I will. |
Lonesomeme
18 years ago
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<done!> great job! I enjoyed the read. Fell free to read "Taking advantage" or "Water Wonderland" or "To Be Loved in the Warmth of Your Own Bed" Thanks again...-unattractive1 |
KeyxMashingxParody
18 years ago
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Sure thing hun. I'll get right to it, And Thank you for your comments, you too Stephen, and Thank you for the critcism, I must say, you are very outspoken. haha bye |
IdTakeABulletForYou
18 years ago
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Http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/sad/poems.php?id=876362 |
Lonesomeme
18 years ago
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Ehhh...what is flay?....like to skin a fish?....lol |
KeyxMashingxParody
18 years ago
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Flaw, sry typo, i type fast. haha |
Lonesomeme
18 years ago
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Oh...you didnt see any flaws?...lol...trust me, they exist..lol...after reading some of the other poets on here...i am VERY humbled...although, i never really though I was any good before either lol. |
KeyxMashingxParody
18 years ago
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No, you're talented. The rhymes scheme was off at like two points, but I understood it, so 5/5 |