First 5 people, 2 for 4....

Good morning...nothing like spending the morning reading some poetry.... If you would r/r/c on:

"Working on it"
"To Be Loved in the Warmth of Your Own Bed"

I will be glad to do the same for 4 of your poems.
Be sure to tell me which or yours you would like me to r/r/c to....and please critique mine as I will do that same. Any one liners will no recieve the full reward.

I would..but I have already r/r/c on both of them...Great touches to them btw!!!
Tyanna

I commented on your two poems, fantastic i have to say... man you are so expressive! i would appreciate it if you could read

"looking in the mirror"
"if you could see what i see"
"all falls apart" and one of your choice...

thanks!!