Honest Feedback (1 for 2, 2 for 3)

Hey everyone,
I would appreciate honest feedback on the following poems.
- Trying To Explain It
- Scent Of Dead

I want honest feedback so please dont be afraid of hurting my feelings.
No one liners please.
If you want pacific poems doing then leave titles.
And no explicit poems please... there just not my thing.

Thank you!
xx

<DONE>

Ok, you can read any of my featured ones...the explicit poems are not fould language or drugs or anything...they are more sensual...but you pick..I am not picky.

I read one of your poems.. if you could please read my 2 newest poems please and thanks :)

Done both of your poems. Thank you both for your comments!
xx

Anyone else?

--Done--

Oh I love giving honest feedback ^.^

I'll do two;you do three. =]

Pick at random please, I have none in particular that I want done.

Lisa :]
Done they were great! :)

Heh heh.
I'll do your poems again.
Woot.

K ive done 2. Ill do more of yours tomorow.
And no i didnt spell realised wrong, i live in england...