Honest Feedback (1 for 2, 2 for 3)

  • Simple Sensation
    18 years ago

    Hey everyone,
    I would appreciate honest feedback on the following poems.
    - Trying To Explain It
    - Scent Of Dead

    I want honest feedback so please dont be afraid of hurting my feelings.
    No one liners please.
    If you want pacific poems doing then leave titles.
    And no explicit poems please... there just not my thing.

    Thank you!
    xx

  • Lonesomeme
    18 years ago

    <DONE>

    Ok, you can read any of my featured ones...the explicit poems are not fould language or drugs or anything...they are more sensual...but you pick..I am not picky.

  • Darien
    18 years ago

    I read one of your poems.. if you could please read my 2 newest poems please and thanks :)

  • Simple Sensation
    18 years ago

    Done both of your poems. Thank you both for your comments!
    xx

  • Simple Sensation
    18 years ago

    Anyone else?

  • ASPHYXIATED
    18 years ago

    --Done--

    Oh I love giving honest feedback ^.^

    I'll do two;you do three. =]

    Pick at random please, I have none in particular that I want done.

  • Simple Sensation
    18 years ago

    Lisa :]
    Done they were great! :)

  • Startle Me
    18 years ago

    Heh heh.
    I'll do your poems again.
    Woot.

  • Simple Sensation
    18 years ago

    K ive done 2. Ill do more of yours tomorow.
    And no i didnt spell realised wrong, i live in england...