Honest Feedback 1 for 2

Hey everyone,

- A Cry No One Hears

I appreciate honest feedback and constructive criticism in my work so please no one liners.
In return ill do 2 of your poems, leave titles if you want specific one's done.
Please no explicit poems...

Thank you! :)
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Alright.
I'll do yours :]

ME TOO!

-Dying in you Dreams
&
-To Remember

-Liz-
~muahs to all~

*Startle Me*
Done. Thanks for your ocmment.
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.. didnt see it on your page...

Darien
I mean a cry no one hears... Sorry.
I was really tired yesterday when i made this thread...
Ill edit it now..

Lingering Silence
Ive done both of those poems, as well as the one's you asked me to on my other thread. Really enjoyable reads. Keep writing! xx

Tear Of Divine Hope
Ive done those. :)
They were great.
Thanks for comment.
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Anyone else?

Done!!!.. any of my poems will be fine : )
lol.. and I was confused : P

MY1Nonly lostDREAMER
Done both of those. Well done. :)
Thank for comment...
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Darien
DOne your poems. Both were great. Thanks for comment...
And that what lack of sleep does to you. So moral of the story... get at least 6 hours of sleep everynight. :D

♥ღ♥~RaZaN~♥ღ♥

Done your poems...
Thanks for comment.
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I left a brutally honest comment :) and I'm sorry.

Please bash my two newest...

Constellations
-and-
New Moon in a Fruit Bowl

Thanks.

--
oh lol and it's "specific."
"Pacific" is an ocean or it means "to be passive." :)

Do you mind if i do those poems tomorow or maybe later tonight? I have to go now.
Oh and i dont mind brutal honest. Infact its what i like. :)
And like i said before, i was really tired when i wrote the poem as well as when i started this thread. So anyways next time ill try and write uncliche.
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