Please........R/R/C

I know It long but can you please R/R/C on 'Blinded by my lighting Way' and ' Broken home '

I will do double each comment you give me, and give it to your pieces.

Thanks for Your time.
Elainexox

I read blinded by my lighting way. It was a really well written poem. Strong emtion good flow 5/5.
Could you do Broken heart, and Why didn't you listen, if you haven't already done them. I will try to read your other poems when I have more time. Thanks.

Hey Vanessa I will went I get home from school. Im at school at the moment and I don't have much time

I will i have time to waste all the poems i read will have xxx alex xxx at the bottom so you know ive read them :D. Please read ' The bodys rain' as the first poem you read any others will be much appreciated .

xxx alex xxx