can you tell me what you think of this poem? i really want some

Sitting on the floor
blood dripping from her veins
she barricaded the door
of herself she is so ashamed
someone could have saved her
they could have saved her life
she wouldn't die for sure
but she still has her knife
so she cuts a little more,
and than a little deeper
she screams & falls to the floor
they still can't quite reach her
finally they get through
but they get through a little too late
her shirt was no longer blue
now they've become irate
she must have been confused
she thought no body cared
they had nothing to lose
these emotions they did not share
so now this girl is dead
and no one understands why
they wouldn't look deep down inside
where all she wanted to do is cry...

Great poem you are really talented!! I like the way it flow and how you made it rythme! Very good keep it up:)
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