1 for 5 deal, cant pass it up...

I have a new poem, I know that no one likes my writing so I guess this is futile but maybe someone will decide to read it and at least comment that it sucks and tell me how to improve upon it...its a little out of the ordinary and abstract...so much so that I dont even really know what I was trying to say...its called:
"A Tear of Forgiveness"
Please r/r/c otherwise...no dice on the 1 for five...I will always make good on deals..

Leave titles so I can respond to your five... I appreciate everyone who is willing to participate...thanks

Right after i give you my titles i will read ur poem

Break my heart
just another disgrace under the sun
Not a day goes by
Live without
and forgotten angel

they all should be on my featured poesm list if noit..they are all pretty recent
so

Thanks alot!

~love~
~Shannon!~

I read it and I liked it, anyhow.. If you'll r/r/c any five that catch your eye, it would be appreciated. Thanks.
-Ally

I'll do it, can you do my 5 latest poems? thanks so much!! i'm sure it'll be great

I done it. I loved it.

Can you please do:
-The reason
-Reverse this curse [Tetractys]
-Crashed [Acrostic]
-The one I'm waiting for [Etheree]
-I need you
Thank you.

I'll do it could you do my latest 5 plz! thx

Hi, I read your poem. I thought that it was great.
Could you please r/r/c

Like a Thunderstorm
Dragon
Killing Me Slowly
Locked Heart
and
Forever

Thanks:)

I am on my way to do your poem. And it is not true that nobody wants to read your work> I do. even if you weren't offering 1 to 5. Your on my favorites list. could you plz do
What u asked for
Crumple up and die
no more drinking
I will always be there
Broken heart
Thanks.

Done>>>> Very good poem! I loved it!!!
I know you have r/r/c on some of mine b 4 so I guess just do some that you haven't.. Thanks

Hey, loved the poem. <3

Mk. Can you PLEASE do:
01. Beauty Within Me.
02. Where I Need To Go.
03. Heavens Sparkle Pearl.
04. Stereotypical World. [Song].
05. Emotions Waterfall. [Song]

Thank you, very much!!!!!!!!!

Well, thank you everyone for your responses and ratings, I hope that most everyone enjoyed this poem and if you are at all interested in any of my other poems by all means, give them a look. I opened this discussion and after an hour of no ones responses I gave up...Checked it like 7 hours later and 11!!!!! I will be working diligently tomorrow all day to catch up on everyones requests...If I havent gotten to you by 2pm tomorrow, send me a message and tell me to not forget about you...:) not that I will, just as a reminder, but I WILL get to everyones poems..and since it will be an extra day, I will throw in an extra poem of MY choice for everyone...have a great time...I love this freakin site!

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-Unattractive1