2 For 4. :D

  • Teria
    18 years ago

    Mk. If you read my two poems, I will return yours.
    Deal?

    Read:
    01. What it takes.
    02. Can't we try?

    Please, please leave titles.
    And, no one liners.
    I'd really appreciate it!!
    <3

  • Kurt
    18 years ago

    Great poems, I really enjoyed reading them. If you could return the favor on

    1) White Angel
    2) After You Said Yes
    3) A Hand For A Quill
    4) Afraid of the Dark

    Thanks in advance and if you could, please leave little tips and hits that you think would enhance the poem.

    -AOTD/Kurt

  • Vanessa
    18 years ago

    I r/r/c you two poems. I enjoyed them both. You did a good job. Could u plz do
    what u asked 4
    why didn't u listen
    broken heart
    Happy birthday
    Some of these are explict i hope that is ok.
    Thanks

  • Teria
    18 years ago

    Afraid of the Dark,
    I'm not allowed to do White Angel.. It's for my contest.
    But, I'm sure it will be commented soon as I judge. Lol. You did a great job with it.
    I went ahead and did.. A lovers walk. Which, thank god I did. :] And, I'm adding you to my favorites! :D
    Oh, and the ones I read didn't need 'enhancing' but I'm sure I'll be reading yours more often, so I will when I see things.. like that.. Lol.

    Done with Vanessa's as well.

    Thank you both, very much.

    Anyone else?