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  • Simple Sensation
    18 years ago

    Hey everyone,

    - This Chunk Of Metal Holds Great Power

    I would appreciate honest feedback on this poem. Please be as nasty as you want, as i want to be improve my poetry writing skills. Please no one liners, i want comments that show youve acttually read the poem.
    In return ill do 2 of your poems. If you want specific poems done then leave titles. Please dont leave explicit... I odnt have anything againts them but.. theyre not my thing..

    Oh i would also appreciate more feedback on;

    - Peaceful Blue, A Gentle Breeze

    If you also do this poem ill do 3 of your poems. Same conditions as stated above.

    Thank you!
    Ill get to your poems ASAP.
    xx

  • Kaila
    18 years ago

    Will do u can pick anyones u want I'll do them both

  • Simple Sensation
    18 years ago

    Done...
    Thank you. :)
    xx

  • skynerraw
    18 years ago

    I did This Chunk Of Metal Holds Great Powe, I'll try to do Peaceful Blue, A Gentle Breeze, If you could do any I'd be happy :D

  • BeautifulxMess
    18 years ago

    Done. Great poem!
    Please do
    Caleb Scott(Acrostic)
    Shortcut to Hell
    Thanks :D

  • Simple Sensation
    18 years ago

    SkYwEe
    Ive done your poems. Great reads. :)
    Thanks for your comemnts.
    xx

  • Synh
    18 years ago

    Alright, i'll do yours.

    The Clown and Nevre Wake please :)

  • Faded
    18 years ago

    Ill do yours, i only have 2 poems for u to do, so yea

  • Startle Me
    18 years ago

    Cool stuff.
    Will you comment on my
    Unknown (Song)
    and
    Into the Heart (battle)