You scratch my back, I'll scratch yours..

  • Lisa
    18 years ago

    Been away from this site forever, But wrote a new poem and decided I would add it to my collection. =)
    If you could please read and vote on it I would return the favor to any of your poems...
    Feel free to read, comment, and vote on as many poems as you like, for each one you leave me I will gladly return the favor. =)
    Thanks!

  • christina
    18 years ago

    Ok i'll do with you im new i only have one poem in it so far it the frist one i every wrote.

  • Lisa
    18 years ago

    Thanks so much.
    And like I told you, for your first poem it's very well written.

  • Startle Me
    18 years ago

    Alright.
    Will you comment
    And don't forget to vote
    On my
    Into the Heart (Battle)
    ??

  • Lisa
    18 years ago

    Done.
    And thanks for that comment. =)
    I'm glad you liked it.

    Anyone else?

  • Vanessa
    18 years ago

    I read two of your poems F**k They Must and Anew
    I liked them both. I added the first one to my favorites list. Could u plz read my newest two
    *I want to end my life
    *You were not there
    Thanks

  • Lisa
    18 years ago

    Sorry it took me a couple days.. Working two jobs sucks. But I r/r/c Your poems. Thanks so much for the comments!

    Anyone else??

  • Lisa
    18 years ago

    .. Anyone else? =)

  • Narphangu
    18 years ago

    Hey, I read... commented... I think I voted too..

    Just want to say that the poem I read was flipping awesome. But I guess I said that in my comment.
    So... hehe.
    Yeah.

    Choose any of my work. Doesn't matter which.
    =}

  • Kaila
    18 years ago

    I'll do one could u plz do
    Summer bliss
    thx

  • Vanessa
    18 years ago

    I know i have already answered thi once, but I read another one of your poems, and I wass hoping that you could read my newest one.
    *It happened to me
    It is kind of long, but I would appericate any comments you could give me. Thanks in advance.

  • Lisa
    18 years ago

    Security Pillow - Thanks so much! I r/r/c the first one I saw that had no votes and only one comment.
    Great job on it btw.

    Kaila - Awww that was such a sweet poem. Although I'm sure you read that in my comment. And thanks for your comment! Keep up the good writing.

    Vanessa - Hey! thanks for reading another poem. I'm glad you liked that one too.. It's always nice when someone reads an older poem that doesn't seem to get read anymore and actually likes it!
    Thanks. =)

    Alright.. done with that. =)
    We have some really really great writers on this site. lol.

    Anyone else??

  • KaKaSHi
    18 years ago

    Yes yes! me me me!
    ill rrc...=D
    all i have are 4 poems...
    although i think "the day you shed a tear" is my best...

  • Lisa
    18 years ago

    Nirvanic Sonneteer - Wow. And Wow.
    Well you can tell what I think from my comments.
    I r/r/c two of your poems.
    Cuz I felt like it.
    And you seemed so excited about reading mine lol.
    Thanks!!

  • Lisa
    18 years ago

    Alright and for those of you who haven't yet...
    I actually posted two new poems that day.
    So feel free to r/r/c both.
    and if there's any older ones that catch your eye feel free to do the same with those.
    I'm always willing to return the favor..
    And I'm always looking to add more ppl to my favorite's list. ;)

    So.. again I ask.. Anyone else??

  • Lisa
    18 years ago

    Lol a long time ago??
    Naw, you can do whatever poem/poems that you want.
    Whichever one has a title that catches your eye.
    ;)
    Although if somehow you end up reading one that's absolute crap (I have a couple of those) make sure you read one that's not before you place an opinion on my writing lol.
    Thanks!
    -Lisa.

  • Lisa
    18 years ago

    Haha, Sure thing hun. =)
    And thank you.

  • Lisa
    18 years ago

    Hey thanks for r/r/c my poems.
    I did of course return the favor. =)

    Anyone else..?

  • Lisa
    18 years ago

    .. Anyone??

  • Lisa
    18 years ago

    Alright, I did two of yours.
    Sorry it took me so long to return those.. My internet got turned off!!
    Damn Verizon.
    Someone vandalized the box on the street with all the wires in it or something and it took them forever to send someone out to fix it. They wanted to charge me 100 bucks.

    Either way my internet's back up and running (Obviously) So..

    Anyone else??

  • xxSnow Angelxx
    18 years ago

    Lol...i'll do yours right away
    Could u r/r/c my latest 2 pls...thnx a lot!
    xxPoojaxx

  • Lisa
    18 years ago

    Sure! =) On my way right now..
    And Thank You.

  • Lisa
    18 years ago

    Done. =)
    Wow you're fast too. lol

    ..Anyone else??

  • Lisa
    18 years ago

    ..Anyone???

  • Lisa
    18 years ago

    .. Anyone else?? =D

  • Lisa
    18 years ago

    Come on, there's got to be someone else..
    =D

  • Kaila
    18 years ago

    I will do whichever one of mine

  • Vanessa
    18 years ago

    No!!! I r/r/c that one. wow is all I can say, can y plz do my newest Another dream

  • Lisa
    18 years ago

    Done and done.
    Thank You for doing that. =)
    and Yay Vanessa I'm glad you liked that poem... I was hesitant about posting it on here seeing as how I wrote it when I was 12.

    Anyone else..?

  • Lisa
    18 years ago

    .. Anyone?

  • Lisa
    18 years ago

    This old Man He played one,
    He played Knick Nack on my thumb with a
    Nick Nack Patty Wack Give a Dog A Bone
    This Old Man Came Rolling Home.
    I have that song stuck in my head.
    I love how it all rhymes so easy.
    A very simplistic song.

    Anyways.. Lol.

    Anyonw else?

  • Vanessa
    18 years ago

    Nothing new to ad except I have that song stuck in my head too, I don't know why, I thought I was the only one lol