To The Onlookers - William Heyen

  • Clayton Joe
    18 years ago

    To The Onlookers
    by William Heyen

    When our backs are turned,
    when someone stares at us,
    we feel them.
    You who watched the killing, and did nothing,
    still feel the eyes of those dead
    on your bodies.

    How many see you
    as you pick a violet?
    How many oak branches twist
    into hands begging for help?
    How many memories congeal
    in the sun's evening blood?

    O the unsung cradlesongs
    in the dove's nightcries--
    so many would have loved
    their own stars in the night skies,
    but now only the old well
    can do it for them.

    You did not murder,
    but looked on, you,
    who could have been changed
    into light.

    What do you guys think of this poem? Hidden Meanings, Form, Languange, Structure?

  • ImmortalKitty
    18 years ago

    This poem has great structure, that language and form as well are great. The meaning is not so hiddent to one whose eyes are open, in a non-literal sense. I think this is a great poem all in all.