Truth is such a rare thing, it is delightful to tell it.

Truth is such a rare thing, it is delightful to tell it. - Emily Dickinson.

That's exactly what I'm offering. Brutally honest feedback on your poems.

You know what you're letting yourself in for by replying to this post, so I don't expect childish fits in return for commenting on your poems.

If you don't like harsh critique. Turn right around.

Otherwise, leave 1 or 2 titles here.

Could you please r/r/c

Beautiful Garden
and
Understanding

Thanks:)

Could you please r/r/c on any of mine....perferibly my older ones. thank you

oh and defidently read love your little butterfly....

thanks and much love

I've commented on all requested.

Hmm... how bout "Beth" then "A lonely disease"

The bodys' rain please

Peaceful Blue, A Gentle Breeze...

Please and thank you! :)
Oh and ill return it.
xx

Troubled water pleae.

Ive only got three poems so u can do all of them if u want. if not please do sad love story and What Love is.