'empty' one for (you pick)!!! :] checkkk it out?!

Hey guys!! i just recently wrote a new poem, its called 'empty' and im really curious to know what people think. and unfortunatly its a true story, so please check it out. and do critisize i appreciate it cause it helps me get better. and in return i will comment up to 7 of your poems. please leave titles. if you leave one liner, expect them in return. and let me know in the comment to look back here so i know what poems to read. :] thanks

-liz

I'll read/rate/comment your poem. I'd really appreciate it if you read/rate/comment my poem The Onset of Putrefaction in return.

Thanks.
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C'mon any more?!?!?!!?!