Honest Feedback 1 for 2 or 2 for 3

Hey everyone,
Id appreciate honest feedback on the following poems please;

- Your Beautiful Song
- Just Fly Away

One's a nature poems, which i dont write often but i have to say i love writing. So yeah it's different from what i usually write. :)

Anyways rules;
- No explicit poems please.
- No one liners or anything of the sort. Unless your comment shows me youve acctually read the poem i wont return.
- I want honesty. So be as nasty and mean as you want. I dont care. I want to improve and honesty will help me improve.

And thats it. In return if you do one of my poems, i will do two of yours. And if you do both of my poems i will do 3 of yours. Please and thank you! :)
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Hey great deal!! :] i'll chech this out. uhm in return can you do my newest poem, empty and any other one that intrests you.

E LIZ a beth

Thanks for the comment. :)
Anyways i ocmmented both of your poems. Both good reads.
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No one else??

The Tasteless

DOne 3 of your poems. :)
Thanks for the ocmments.
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I'll get to everyone elses later today...

I read them both, and I really liked them!!

IF you could read my newest and any others that catch your eyes.

thanks!

I CoZ This Pain

Done three of your poems. :)
Thanks for the comments!
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Phelan
Ive doen three of your poems.
Thanks forcomments!

Darien
I hope you dont mind but ill do your poems tomorow...
Ill get to it after school hopefully...
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