PLEASE HELP MY POEM!!!!!!!!!

Come In With The Rain

Crystals fall from the cloud,
As doors open, windows close,
Typically cover is taken,
So this is what they've chose,

this poem needs desperate attention for comments/votes

please attend to it's needs!!!!

ask and it is given.

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I loved you poem. It was amazing.
Could u plz read
Dragons, fairies, little green men