Got any good poems?

  • N J Thornton
    18 years ago

    Hopefully by now someone knows what sort of thing I like.
    Originality unforced rhyme or free verse, abstract if you have any...
    NO cliche teenage rants!!

    If you have anything good to share leave the title here, and I'll leave my honest feedback on it.

    Here's a new thought...give me an idea on how honest and harsh you mind me being. I say this because I know some people's ego is sensitive.

    lightly honest - so-so honest - brutally honest

    If you leave it blank I'll go into automatic brutally honest mode, so be warned!!!

    ready....set....

    GO!

  • KeyxMashingxParody
    18 years ago

    Lol Funny funny. (I hate teenage rants also, and I'm a teenager. lmao)

    -Tonight tonight!
    Just posted it.
    -brutally honest<----YES!!!!

    Thank you!

    -Liz-

  • IdTakeABulletForYou
    18 years ago

    Brutally honest m'dear. Lemme collect some links.

  • Choose xX Alex Xx Life
    18 years ago

    Go for it any of my latest poems :D

    thank youuuu xxx alex xxx

  • IdTakeABulletForYou
    18 years ago

    Hopefully, You'll LOVE these:

    Choose any one, as far as I know, they are all a sense of "free verse"...

    http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/misc/poems.php?id=807001

    http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/life/poems.php?id=807002

    http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/misc/poems.php?id=808719

    http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/sad/poems.php?id=852739

    http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/misc/poems.php?id=808718

    http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/sad/poems.php?id=866866

    http://www.best-love-poems.com/poems.php?id=865453

    http://www.best-love-poems.com/poems.php?id=855890

    http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/sad/poems.php?id=838805

    http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/sad/poems.php?id=808153 (if you need an explanation, p/m me)

    http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/sad/poems.php?id=807010

  • N J Thornton
    18 years ago

    Done.

  • IdTakeABulletForYou
    18 years ago

    Bad choice =[ Whatever.
    Sigh.

  • amber
    18 years ago

    Any of my poems
    brutally honest

  • Startle Me
    18 years ago

    I've wanted you to comment on my poems
    For so very long...
    Lol.
    I heard you were good in giving them.
    Anywayz,
    Will you do my
    Cure For the Itch.
    Thankies :]]
    I'd love it if you could be brutally honest with me.

  • xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex
    18 years ago

    I gave you most of my orginals. "Boxes and Triggers" could be considered cliche topic, but written not cliche. See what you think. And thank you. I'll do some of yours if you want to leave some titles. Oh, and no doubt brutally honest, as always, my dear.
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    01.Epidemic on the Street {Kryielle Sonnet}
    02.Boxes and Triggers {Nove Otto}
    03.Seperate Gardens {Triple Tanka}
    04.Resurrection {Double Nove Otto}
    05.Babylon

    Thank you for your time. =]

    xTheEcstasyofSuicidex

  • Vanessa
    18 years ago

    I don't have a problem with brutal honest. could u plz read my newest poem. Pain isn't real. Don't be fooled by the title, it is diffrent, from most poems of the same nature. thanks