Sounded good on paper, what do u think?

  • Vanessa
    18 years ago

    I have written another one. It sounded good on paper I am not so sure about now. I would appericate honest comments, and please vote. I will return the favor as always 3 to 1. Please leave titles, and be honest. thanks
    Pain isn't real(razor blade death)

  • Bryan
    18 years ago

    I think it sounded great,
    just my newest collab please!