Honest Feedback 1 for 2

  • Simple Sensation
    18 years ago

    Hey everyone,
    Id appreciate honest feedback on this poem.

    - Five Confessions Of a Murderer

    In return ill so 2 of your poems. I want honest feedback, and your comment has to show that youve acctually read. Tips on improving are always welcome. And be as nasty as you want to be - it helps me improve.
    Im return ill do 2 of your poems, leave titles if you want specific one's doing. But please no explicit poems, there not my type..
    Other then that enjoy the poem! :)
    Thanks.
    xx

  • Simple Sensation
    18 years ago

    Done.
    Sorry one of them got posted twice. Could you complain for one of the ocmments?
    Sorry baout that...

    Anyone else?

  • tryinXtoXholdXmyXheadXup
    18 years ago

    I got this, will you look at
    change

    and

    you will leave

    they are new styles for me so ya tell me whatyuo think,
    nessa

  • Simple Sensation
    18 years ago

    Done...
    Thanks for comment.
    xx

  • Simple Sensation
    18 years ago

    DOne.
    Thnaks for thatcomment! :)
    Made me smile.
    xx

    Anyone else?

  • Simple Sensation
    18 years ago

    K guys i just renamed that poem... Ill edit my post now..