Honest Feedback 1 for 2

Hey everyone,
Id appreciate honest feedback on this poem.

- Five Confessions Of a Murderer

In return ill so 2 of your poems. I want honest feedback, and your comment has to show that youve acctually read. Tips on improving are always welcome. And be as nasty as you want to be - it helps me improve.
Im return ill do 2 of your poems, leave titles if you want specific one's doing. But please no explicit poems, there not my type..
Other then that enjoy the poem! :)
Thanks.
xx

Done.
Sorry one of them got posted twice. Could you complain for one of the ocmments?
Sorry baout that...

Anyone else?

I got this, will you look at
change

and

you will leave

they are new styles for me so ya tell me whatyuo think,
nessa

Done...
Thanks for comment.
xx

DOne.
Thnaks for thatcomment! :)
Made me smile.
xx

Anyone else?

K guys i just renamed that poem... Ill edit my post now..