Want honest feedback?

  • N J Thornton
    18 years ago

    Leave one or two titles.

    I'll leave completely honest feedback on your poems.
    If it's great, you'll recieve lovely compliments.
    If I'm not keen, I'll tell you why I'm not impressed!!

    You may return the favour, although it isn't compulsary.

  • N J Thornton
    18 years ago

    Done those.
    Loved "Tasting Your Secrets"

    Anyone else?

  • Jessica
    18 years ago

    My latest two please hunni. Although I must warn you they aren't my best. Thanks so much sweetie.

  • The Pessimistic Peabody
    18 years ago

    I'm not good at all but i figure the only way to get better is pure blunt feedback. would you check out any of my featured poems, thnx

  • Tricky Daze
    18 years ago

    Just 'No More Waiting For you'

    and it's a nice of you
    Take care
    Sincerely,
    Laura

  • theffervescent
    18 years ago

    If you would read any of my poems that would be great. However, my favorite one is Scarlet Web.

  • Debbie
    18 years ago

    Could you please review "Brooding" and "Gidson (Acrostic)"?

    Thank you.

  • Greg Beam
    18 years ago

    Ive only got 3 poems so u can do them all if u want or just pick any 1 or 2 u want.

  • Vanessa
    18 years ago

    I like honest comments, and i would love honesty on these two if u don't mind
    *deep cuts bring death
    *flash

  • Infected with His Deadly Love
    18 years ago

    Pot of Gold
    &
    No news
    Please and thank you.

  • Startle Me
    18 years ago

    Hello, dearie :]
    Thank you for your feedback from before.
    I kind of laughed :p Sorry.
    But still.
    Will you do either my
    Planet Love
    Or
    Knight in Armor
    They're both bad.
    But I want to edit and make it better :]

  • Thrax
    18 years ago

    I only have three poems, so feel free to do which ever titles catch your attention

  • Black Princess
    18 years ago

    'so i cry'

    thanks : )

  • Robert
    18 years ago

    Please read
    God Is...
    Cain