Comment on my poems plz!!!!!!!

If u comment on the following poem I will triple the favor. Please don't forget to vote, and leave titles here for me to read. Thanks in advance
*Deep cuts bring death
*flash
*Pain isn't real
*the girl stood alone
*Visions
*Storm coming in
*Only in my mind
*somebody spoke
*Where do I belong
*plain to see the pain
*dragons fairies little green men
If you do them all I will do 35 of your poems, but that is only if you do them all. thanks