Comment on my poems plz!!!!!!!

  • Vanessa
    18 years ago

    If u comment on the following poem I will triple the favor. Please don't forget to vote, and leave titles here for me to read. Thanks in advance
    *Deep cuts bring death
    *flash
    *Pain isn't real
    *the girl stood alone
    *Visions
    *Storm coming in
    *Only in my mind
    *somebody spoke
    *Where do I belong
    *plain to see the pain
    *dragons fairies little green men
    If you do them all I will do 35 of your poems, but that is only if you do them all. thanks