1 for 1 HONEST comments

Please comment on my poem Flesh and Bone,
or any other poem,
honestly.
Leave a poem for me to comment back,
and I will comment,
honestly.
Please note that I will be harsh, but really, I just want to help you improve your skill.
I might end up telling you I think you poem sucks...not in those words, of course.
So if you don't want to hear it,
don't bother.
Thank you,
Kelsea <33

Done <33

Ha.
Any others?

Done please read my newest one Unsightly blemishes deep inside my soul. thanks in advance

I don't care about harshness, and I could really use an honest comment, or a comment at all. Anyways, I would really appreciate if you would read and comment on "Not okay", my latest poem. I'll read yours now. =)

Thanks!

XoXo
Gaby