New poem up, any takers?

New one up,
it's rather old, and I've been debating whether or not to put it up there... but I figure... neh, if it sucks, it sucks.
Oh, it's called Destiny, and it's nothing like most of my work.

Oi, there, it rhymes, too!
Rawr.

[[Ps: I'd love it if you'd rrc it and give some concrtz to it =)]