Abused child part one and two

I took the advice yall offer and made a second poem, about the abused child. Please read and comment, favors returned tripple. thanks in advance
*Abused child
*Abused child part two
PLease leave titles and don't forget to vote.

Was i the one who said you should make a sequal?

Yeah I think you were there are so many members on here lol you were the one thanks for the idea I hope you like it.

I did like it, it was awesome