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I have some poems that i would love some extra comments and votes on. if you comment on all of these then i will comment 9 of yours. if you only want to do 1 then the deal is 1 for 2.

!!!note:!!! when my poems get a max of 10 comments on them don't comment them. my ambition is to have these poems all have a min of 10 comments on them.

plz leave titles. here are my titles that i would love for you to comment on.

What will i gain?
My life is gone
Chance
I can see it in your eyes-(lyrics)

thanx a bunch, David

I am reading and commentg plz read

"i was alone in your city"

Me plzz....could you r/r/c on my latest works..i'll do all yours right away..thnx
xxPoojaxx