First 5 people. only

  • LadyWaszky
    18 years ago

    Hey if you would-tell me what you think on my new poem-
    'it only hurts when im breathing.'

    and in return
    (person) (Amount)
    1st - 6 (Life on Standby)
    2 - 5 (SkYwEe ThE bRoKeN sOuL)
    3- 4 (Sydney)
    4- 3 (NovembeR)
    5-2 (Startle Me)
    EVERYONE ELSE-1

    Tell me what you want. Or i wont comment, i dont care! lol thats why you read the rules. =]

    i really appreciate it... =]

    ~~~WARNING: this poem has a few inapropriate words... =]

    To do list:

    Life on standby:
    ~nature's beauty
    ~stone cold eyes
    ~the blue shadow
    ~a beautiful lie
    ~the woods
    ~lingering silence

  • skynerraw
    18 years ago

    I did it :D I loved it :D

  • Sydney
    18 years ago

    Sure.

  • AlaSkA
    18 years ago

    Ok ill do the 1- for 3

    can you do.......

    transient
    checkmate
    a childs prayer

  • Startle Me
    18 years ago

    I'll do it :P
    Will you do mine as well?
    It's an explicit one, though.
    It's called...
    Echoes.
    Thankies :]

  • Robert
    18 years ago

    Ok lets do this thing

    Please read

    Legalized Pusher
    Knock, Knock
    What We Share
    What The Hell
    Broken By You
    Tonight