First 5 people. only

Hey if you would-tell me what you think on my new poem-
'it only hurts when im breathing.'

and in return
(person) (Amount)
1st - 6 (Life on Standby)
2 - 5 (SkYwEe ThE bRoKeN sOuL)
3- 4 (Sydney)
4- 3 (NovembeR)
5-2 (Startle Me)
EVERYONE ELSE-1

Tell me what you want. Or i wont comment, i dont care! lol thats why you read the rules. =]

i really appreciate it... =]

~~~WARNING: this poem has a few inapropriate words... =]

To do list:

Life on standby:
~nature's beauty
~stone cold eyes
~the blue shadow
~a beautiful lie
~the woods
~lingering silence

I did it :D I loved it :D

Sure.

Ok ill do the 1- for 3

can you do.......

transient
checkmate
a childs prayer

I'll do it :P
Will you do mine as well?
It's an explicit one, though.
It's called...
Echoes.
Thankies :]

Ok lets do this thing

Please read

Legalized Pusher
Knock, Knock
What We Share
What The Hell
Broken By You
Tonight