Honest Feedback 1 for 2, 2 for 3 etc..

Hey guys,
Well if anyone could comment on any of my latest poems, id appreciate it. I was honest feedback. Be as nasty as you want. I want to improve my work. Your comments must show youve read the poem at the very least. So no one liners.

In return ill do 2/3 of your poems, leave title if you want specific one's doing. But no explicits one's please...

Thank you!
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I did His female Disease, wonderfully well written. Could u plz do my latest images of a child. I promise it is not explict this time lol.Thanks in advance.

PositiveAspectOfNegativeThinking

Ive done your poems. Ilovedthem. Really made me think. Thank you for your comment.
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Vanessa
Ill get to your poems ASAP tomorow k? It's a little late hear and i need to get to sllep otherwise ill fall asleep during class. Lol.
Thanks.
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Vanessa
Done your poems.
Thank for comment.
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Anyone else?

I've done Fashion's Suicide please return favor for
Inescapable
Waiting
thnx

Lonerlette

Done both of them. Very enjoyable! :)
Keep them up.
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Anyone else?

Did your other poem please return favor for serial murder and Dead end thnx again

Ok guys, im sorry but i cant do them now as i have to get of the computer.
But hopefully ill get to them tomorow around the same time... Ill try my best.
Thanks for ocmments though...
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